Thursday, 17 January 2019

Boy Swallows Universe by Trent Dalton

I suspect I'm going to be the lone dissenting voice when it comes to Boy Swallows Universe by Trent Dalton.

This is a debut Australian novel garnering a HUGE amount of attention and rave reviews. In the lead up to our Christmas rush at work last year, this is the book many, many locals were asking for. Customers were returning to tell us how much they ADORED the book and every second book club, including mine, seemed to pick it for their summer holiday read.

I was thrilled that I was going to have a good excuse to make time for this book and I couldn't wait to get stuck into it.

To start with what I loved:

  • The cover - just gorgeous, vibrant and psychedelic. The blue wren makes sense once you start reading. For an in depth look into how cover designers settle on the finished design read this fascinating piece from the Australian Book Design Association. They interviewed Darren Holt and Claire Ward, the Australian and UK designers for Boy Swallows Universe (as well as other designers for other books).
  • The writing - Dalton took my breath away in the early stages of the book. I was completely and utterly WOWED.
  • The protagonist, Eli Bell is a wonderful narrator. His voice is believable, charming and unique.
  • The introduction of ex-con Slim Halliday as Eli's babysitter added a quirky touch.
  • I loved the themes - a young boy looking for a 'good man' to love and model his life on, brotherly love and protection, a young boys fierce need for mother love.
  • Early on I also began to suspect that this book was also heavily embedded in real life events.
  • Slim Halliday was a real criminal who did his time in Boggo Road Gaol.
  • How much else was real?
However around the 50 page mark, the underbelly criminal stuff started to take centre stage. Drugs, drug running and drug lords took over the story. Because I now suspected this was a based on a true story (I hadn't googled at this point) I made myself keep reading even though, every single extra sordid drug reference and act turned me off more and more and more. 

I believe that if someone actually had to LIVE through something ghastly, the very least I can do from my safe, white, middle class home, is read about it with understanding and compassion and a huge dose of gratefulness for my very ordinary upbringing.

True crime is not my usual genre, but I have been known to be fascinated by the occasional story. We watched the second season of Underbelly that starred Matthew Newton which was centred around the murder of Donald Mackay in Griffith in 1977, but I haven't been able to watch any of the other seasons. I also haven't got into Breaking Bad, The Sopranos or Orange is the New Black.

However, I got to a point, about 100 pages in, where the amazing writing and the affection I felt for the two brothers, wasn't enough to sustain me through the relentless criminal activity. 

I admire Dalton for finding such an incredible way to process the trauma from his childhood. There is so much love for this story 'out there', that I'm sure it will pop up in most of the Australian book awards this year. It deserves it too, the praise being heaped on it, is worth it, but the content is just not my thing. There are so many books, about topics that I have way more interest in, waiting for me to read them, that I don't want to give too much time to one of those that just fails to fit the bill...for me.

Boy Swallows Universe has just been shortlisted for the Indie Debut Fiction Book Awards.

I've labelled this with the Did Not Finish tag, but it was more a case of skim reading the last three quarters of the book before slowing down to read the last chapter properly.


  1. There will always be these kind of books: wow-effect first pages...then not so wow.
    I'm sure we all can name at least 3 right now! One I just finished (review is in progress) Rebecca.
    The first few pages were lyrical, atmospheric....then I met Mrs Van Hooper etc and it all deflated like a cheese soufflé.
    But I digress.
    True crime just draws in all sorts of readers...and I am also not a fan. Only the writing can save these books or me. Good examples are Helen Garner and Chloe Hooper. This number of readers inflates the 'buzz' and the books sell like hotcakes! I know how difficult it is to push yourself through a book that is just not 'your thing'. I appreciate your perseverance...and an honest review!

    1. I totally agree with you about Rebecca - it was one of those books for me too. Whereas My Cousin Rachel kept me on tenterhooks the whole way. I don't mind reading about difficult or yucky topics but gang violence and the drug scene are ones that fails to capture my imagination in any way shape or form. The drug culture always just comes across as so sordid and grubby. It seems to suck all the goodness out of the people involved.

      As you know, I also love Garner & Hooper for their investigative journalism combined with compassionate psychology. Dalton also writes with a lot of compassion, but it wasn't enough to keep me interested in the topic.

    2. If a book is about drug culture?...I don't even open it.


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